Secondly, the article posits that because of this change more people will get jobs to cover up the work left by the employees. However, the lecturer is against this idea and says that the company will have high expectations from the new employees to do the job similarly as it is being done by the employee who left it.
The article states that working four days a week instead of 5 days have several benefits for the company, country and as well as the employees. The author provides three reasons of support for his claim. However, the lecturer refutes all of the claims and says that this change have more detrimental effects than the benefits.
Firstly, the article states that the company will be highly benefited from this change as the workers would get sufficient rest if they work only four days a week, thus decreasing the likelihood of making errors while working which can be very much costly for the company. However, the lecturer refutes this claim and states that the company will be in loss if this change is to take place. He says that, the company will have to hire new employees to compensate the remaining work due to which more money will be spent on them as the company will have to provide them salary as well other costs associated with them such as medical costs, the costs for the new computers, etc. Moreover, more space of the office will be used because of the addition of the new employees.
Secondly, the author states that the country will also benefit from this change. The article states that since new employees will be hired by the companies to complete the work, more of the people of the country will get chance to work, thus decreasing the unemployment from the country. However, the lecturer says that this claim does not hold water and says that the company will have the expectations from the new employees to complete the work as it is done by others. This profound expectations on the new employees can have some detrimental effects as well because the people might not apply for those jobs.
Finally, the article posits that this change will help the individuals in their personal life as well. The article says that the employees will now get sufficient time to spend with their family such that it will have positive impact on their mentality and self-esteem. However, the professor refutes this claim and says that the company will give more priority and preference to the employees who works five days a week such that the ones working fewer days than them will always feel insecure. Moreover, if there is any downturn in the company such that the company has to cut off some of its employees, then the one working the fewer hours will be jettisoned at first.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...is claim. However, the lecturer refutes all of the claims and says that this change have m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 5.04856512141 396% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1373.03311258 144% => OK
No of words: 418.0 270.72406181 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73444976077 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31533592182 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423444976077 0.540411800872 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 419.366225166 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.306457057 49.2860985944 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.933333333 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8666666667 21.698381199 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503728223111 0.272083759551 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199582541821 0.0996497079465 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852943833314 0.0662205650399 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338474029958 0.162205337803 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107505127685 0.0443174109184 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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