Space Tourism
Soon there will be something new for the tourist who has been everywhere and seen everything on Earth. Spacecraft being developed by private commercial companies will soon enable private citizens to buy their own tickets to travel into space, thereby creating a space tourism industry. so far, space travel has been undertaken only by governments, but the new, privatized spaceflight industry will bring great benefits to both science and the public.
First, private space travel will benefit serious space exploration by making spaceflight cheaper. Privatization of space technology will bring technological costs down very fast because it will allow competition--and competition is one of the strongest motivators to cut costs. Thus, lowering the cost of space travel will benefit not only space tourists but also scientists, who will be able to use private space flights for research purposes.
Furthermore, privatization of space travel will accelerate the rate at which important scientific discoveries occur. the aerospace industry already sponsors a lot of groundbreaking scientific research, and adding private spaceflight companies to it will make the industry as a whole grow in size, thereby employing more scientists than it does now. that increased number of working scientists means not only that more discoveries are likely to be made but also that those discoveries are likely to be made more quickly than in the past.
Finally, when governments are the sole providers of space travel, the costs are paid for by the whole taxpaying public, but with privatization, the expenses of space travel will be borne by the customers of the industry. The fact that private spaceflight operators will be able to raise funds through ticket sales means that the financial burden on taxpayers will be eased significantly.
The reading and the lecture are both about how advantageous can be the privatization of space travel. The author of the reading feels that it will be beneficial for public as well as for scientists. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. he is of the opinion that privatization would make the public pay more and the discoveries would suffer.
To begin with, the author argues that space travel will become cheaper, if it is privately operated. The article mentions that the private company in order to get more and more tourist will keep the rate cheaper and there will be the rapid development of technology due to the presence of competition. this specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. he claims that the space travel will rather become more costly as there are other things which needs to be taken care of. Additionally, he says as the spaceflights would take place there needs to be the presence of traffic control system to prevent collision and the space shuttles developed should be accident proof, which will require much more money than usually.
Secondly, the writer suggests that there would be rapid increase in the number of discoveries made. In the article, it is suggested that scientist will be able to utilise the private space flights and will then explore the space more thoroughly making more discoveries possible. moreover, more scientists would be working and exploring space than previously. The lecturer, however, rebut this by mentioning that this would rather delay the innovations. he elaborates on this bringing up the point that by the introduction of commercialization in space exploration scientist will leave their government jobs and will move towards high paying jobs which will make the process of discoveries suffer.
Finally, the author posits that by the privatization of the sector burden on the general public will lower. moreover, in the article it is stated that earlier public tax money was used to plan for space exploration but now only one single company would be investing in the project which will reduce economic burden over public. In contrast, the lecturer position is that by commercialization the burden of paying money will increase more over public. he notes that making space travel an industry would require billions of space stations, space flights to be developed, for which no corporation is capable to pay alone. Therefore, public have to pay more for subsidizing the travel for the customers of this service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, then, therefore, well, as for, in contrast, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.4613686534 201% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 5.04856512141 475% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.01324503311 319% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1373.03311258 154% => OK
No of words: 411.0 270.72406181 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13138686131 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.04702891845 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76659347614 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457420924574 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 419.366225166 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1851091363 49.2860985944 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 4.45695364238 247% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331144404006 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118839975963 0.0996497079465 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733044422482 0.0662205650399 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23154060749 0.162205337803 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324865583097 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 63.6247240618 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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