stein influential writing style
The reading and the lecture are both about steins works impact on these day writing style. Whereas the author of the reading states that Stein`s work are having less influence to writing style compare to other autor such as Fitzgerald, Cumings, and Pound, on the other hand the lecturer suggests that the text author being bias about steins' work and it shows that the writer might be just not into Stein's work. The lecturer casts doubt on the main points made in the reading by providing two/three reasons.
First of all, according to the reading,due to the lack of punctuation that been used by stein, lead some confusion on the reader interpretation.However, the lecturer disputes this point. she says that steins consider the punctuation as an unecesary tool. Furthermore,she mentions that stein’s decision to omit punctuation from her work was not merely a way to make her writing more difficult to follow, The professor is of the opinion that stein’s view is both valid and unique, one that we should contemplate carefully.
Secondly, the reading states that using on cubism concepts is showing an created inaccessible emotion or meaning. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this argument.she argues that applying cubism style in writing enrich the writing style and explore the imagination of the reader. In addition, she brings up the possibility of stein’s impact on later poets. she argues that since stein’s day, poetry has shifted to rely more heavily on the sounds of words used, rather than their meaning, and that stein was likely a significant influence on that change.
Finally, the reading claims that Stein's style didn't show a huge influence to other author. On the other hand, the lecturer believe that her work did serve a diverse of writing style that give a significant impact to other writer. she thinks that stein directly affected the writing style of Hemingway. that provides clear evidence of stein’s importance in the development of literature at the time. Hemingway writing style on choosing simple word and repetition on word adopted from stein style.
In conclusion, although the reading and the lecture are both about stein's influential writing style , the three main points made in the reading are effectively challenged by the lecturer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 30.3222958057 165% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1373.03311258 142% => OK
No of words: 370.0 270.72406181 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25675675676 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86101807075 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 419.366225166 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0940906897 49.2860985944 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5625 110.228320801 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 21.698381199 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06452816374 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 4.19205298013 310% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475732543556 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174781385312 0.0996497079465 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120219510835 0.0662205650399 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289980896852 0.162205337803 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864886453564 0.0443174109184 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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