Many students have to live with a roommate while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hey starting to learn more independent. left behind their parent, sibling, best frie...
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Suggestion: , culture
...e, they are coming from different family,culture,and religion.Even more, some of them ar...
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...m different family,culture,and religion.Even more, some of them are come from other ...
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Suggestion: , instead
...acy and right of each other. For example,instead of playing a loud music that can distur...
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Suggestion: use
...can disturb their roommate, he/she will using headphone for good. thus, being thought...
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...ld be helpful to dissolve the problem. secondly, in dormitory student are required to d...
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...operated as a team with their roommate. it will be more easier to fulfil all the t...
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Suggestion: easier
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...h distribute and take turns to the task it self. for example student can make a househ...
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Suggestion: enhances
...first, but if we meet a suitable one it enhance a joyous new experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99632308474 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3749493927 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121615741288 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398164330357 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337013580007 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676423259835 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347815870935 0.0645574589148 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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