Many students have to live with a roommate while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate?
When children require to life in dormitory for school they starting to learn more independent. left behind their parent, sibling, best friend, and all hometown convenience. It's normal for having such a hard time at the beginning, yet a genuine roommate will be very helpful in that situation. I firmly belive a person with a respectful and responsibility become the best roommate you could ask for.
Firstly, students are diverse, they are coming from different family,culture,and religion.Even more, some of them are come from other part of the world and face completely divergent habit, so being respectful and being an easy-going person can understand each other and easily counterpart dissimilar character. furthermore, a mandatory factor is respect to privacy and right of each other. For example,instead of playing a loud music that can disturb their roommate, he/she will using headphone for good. thus, being thoughtful and flexible could be helpful to dissolve the problem.
secondly, in dormitory student are required to do household task by themself, such as tidying up the bedroom, dish washing, and cooking. they are considering to manage their living place cooperated as a team with their roommate. it will be more easier to fulfil all the task with distribute and take turns to the task it self. for example student can make a household duty schedule, so each will be more responsible and aware to their part.
In conclusions, connecting and keeping up with a different custom will be challenging at first, but if we meet a suitable one it enhance a joyous new experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 259.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99632308474 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629343629344 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3749493927 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121615741288 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398164330357 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337013580007 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676423259835 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347815870935 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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