T Rex bone tissue
The reading and the listening both discuses the identification of the fossil remains of Tyrannosaurus rex (T.rex). The article states the three postulates to provide the shreds of evidence that tissue remails of 70-million-year old T.rex were discovered from the fossils of the leg bone, however, the lecture refutes all the three points and claims that these fossil findings are skeptical by presenting counter-arguments for each of the assertions.
First and foremost, the passage begins by asserting that the presence of hollows indicates blood vessels' presence which is further confirmed by the discovery of a soft organic substance inside the leg bone of T- rex.. This claim is challenged by the lecture by pointing out that it could be anything else other than blood vessels and elaborates this by arguing that long after the animals died, bacteria colonized in the hollows. These bacterias left behind traces of soft organic residue and that is misunderstood with the organic contents of blood vessels.
Next, the professor in the lecture rejects the second argument about dark red spheres by illustrating a couple of facts. First, If the spheres were red blood cells then all the primitive animals whose remains were found from the same place would have the red blood cells, whereas those primitive animals had not developed red blood cells. Second, these spheres were of different origins and were reddish probably because of some reddish minerals. These points refute the writer's implication that red spheres presented the identification of red blood cells as RBCs carry oxygen to tissues and, therefore, they are dark red colored too.
Ultimately, the article wraps its arguments by declaring that a test revealed the presence of collagen fibers in T-rex which is a characteristic feature of bone tissue. The speaker in the listening rebuts this reason by insisting that collagen fiber would not have lasted for more than 100,000 years whereas the T_rex fossil appeared to be 70-million years old. Hence, it couldn't be from T-rex leg bone and probably it had come from the skin tissue of a scientist who was experimenting on T-rex.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...at tissue remails of 70-million-year old T.rex were discovered from the fossils ...
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Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ue remails of 70-million-year old T.rex were discovered from the fossils of the ...
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... substance inside the leg bone of T- rex.. This claim is challenged by the lecture...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
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...ddish minerals. These points refute the writers implication that red spheres presented ...
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Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: couldn't
...d to be 70-million years old. Hence, it couldnt be from T-rex leg bone and probably it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 348.0 270.72406181 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16091954023 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72220334818 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 145.348785872 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548850574713 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 21.2450331126 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4183911644 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.666666667 110.228320801 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 21.698381199 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 4.33554083885 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261778421456 0.272083759551 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101885728255 0.0996497079465 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11465133754 0.0662205650399 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177990539262 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129293112266 0.0443174109184 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.8541721854 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 63.6247240618 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.498013245 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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