TOEFL TPO 01 - Integrated Writing Task
generally employees work fives days a week. but in some places there is another option. they suggest employee working 4 days a week and get less money compare to working 5 days a week. this option maybe seems good for both empoyyes and companies.but in reality it is not true. i explain two factors that are related to both employees and companies.
it seems that employees have more free time and they can spend their leisur time with their families or friends. it is very pleasur for employees. but in reality having less money in bad economical condition causes employees' stress. also by working 4 days in a week compare to 5 weeks in a week their job efficiency decrease and it is not pleasant.
also companies have to hire more employees and hiring many employees is costly. also by hiering many workers they need more free spaces for new people and they need more computers. in other aspect employees need medical benefits wheher they work 4 days or 5 days. so it increase the costs. in other hand many factories increase their expections and they want employees do more works.
finally, i think working 5 days a week is better than the other option. advantages of this is more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Generally
generally employees work fives days a week. but i...
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Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...rally employees work fives days a week. but in some places there is another option....
^^^
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...in some places there is another option. they suggest employee working 4 days a week ...
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Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...money compare to working 5 days a week. this option maybe seems good for both empoyy...
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Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ompanies.but in reality it is not true. i explain two factors that are related to...
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Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ompanies.but in reality it is not true. i explain two factors that are related to...
^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...lated to both employees and companies. it seems that employees have more free tim...
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Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ur time with their families or friends. it is very pleasur for employees. but in r...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ends. it is very pleasur for employees. but in reality having less money in bad eco...
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Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ical condition causes employees stress. also by working 4 days in a week compare to ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...ical condition causes employees stress. also by working 4 days in a week compare to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...iency decrease and it is not pleasant. also companies have to hire more employees a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...iency decrease and it is not pleasant. also companies have to hire more employees a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...es and hiring many employees is costly. also by hiering many workers they need more ...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...es and hiring many employees is costly. also by hiering many workers they need more ...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...es and hiring many employees is costly. also by hiering many workers they need more ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ew people and they need more computers. in other aspect employees need medical ben...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...fits wheher they work 4 days or 5 days. so it increase the costs. in other hand ma...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...heher they work 4 days or 5 days. so it increase the costs. in other hand many factories...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ys or 5 days. so it increase the costs. in other hand many factories increase thei...
^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...nd they want employees do more works. finally, i think working 5 days a week is bette...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ant employees do more works. finally, i think working 5 days a week is better t...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Advantages
...a week is better than the other option. advantages of this is more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, may, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 210.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65714285714 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45437274639 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 419.366225166 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8917700219 49.2860985944 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.125 110.228320801 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.125 21.698381199 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06452816374 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410990648706 0.272083759551 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140507756073 0.0996497079465 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081494888494 0.0662205650399 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25424628956 0.162205337803 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056014346571 0.0443174109184 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.3589403974 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 53.8541721854 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.0289183223 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.86 12.2367328918 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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