TOEFL TPO 11- Integrated Writing Task
The passage discusses a recent study and its findings. The investigation indicates that people spend a little time to read books like novels, poems and plays in comparison with past.
Also, the text claims that reading less books has harmful effects for society and provides three reasons for supporting the idea. However, the professor rejects the reading's hypethosis by stating people can do various thing instead of just reading novels and they can use of the advantages of these works. Consequently, the teacher provides three reasons.
First, the passage asserts that literature has a vital role in providing intellectual stimulation. While the lecture refutes the idea by explaining that other kind of books like scientific and hystorical books are as challenging as novels. So, the teacher says people can learn grat things from these kind of books.
Second, the text asserts that people spend their time on reading useless books or watching movies. However, the talk disagrees with text's idea and desribes that today's culture is not just litreture. Nowadays, culture is different with past and there are a lotof choises for people. Thereare good movies, great musics and other kind of activities that people can replace them with reading novels. So, spending time to these activities is not only helpful but also challenging.
Third, the reading suggests that the trend of reading less literature is regrettable. Furthermore, based on the passage, today, there are a lot of talented writers with grate taste but they lack on supports. However, the teacher rebuts this idea by explaining that maybe this problem is related to writers not readers. The professor adds that writer's books are very complex in comparison with past and it makes audience reluctant to read.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nvestigation indicates that people spend a little time to read books like novels,...
^^
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun books is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...t. Also, the text claims that reading less books has harmful effects for society a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... says people can learn grat things from these kind of books. Second, the text asserts tha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing time to these activities is not only helpful but also challenging. Third, th...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, third, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21678321678 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55690768476 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 419.366225166 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7198525804 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7647058824 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351678158245 0.272083759551 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106588798664 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834833343964 0.0662205650399 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189994849221 0.162205337803 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544612958045 0.0443174109184 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 63.6247240618 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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