TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri
both the reading and the professor talk about the mandatory policy that a company offers to its employees.
reading passage claims that this policy will be beneficial for both the company and employees because of the three mentioned reasons. However, the lecturer finds all the point dubious and provides some evidence to refute them all.
Fist of all, the author argues that decreasing five days working to the four days provide profit for the company. Conversely, the professor brings up the idea that the new worker means new office space and also more medical insurance and training.
Furthermore, the reading passage argues holds the view that unemployed people will be decreased which is a goal for every society. Nevertheless, the lecturer dispute this argument. He points out that the employer has a chance to raise his expectations and increase the work-hours with no additional income. In this condition, not only it has disadvantages but also it improves unpleasant sense in the employee.
Finally, the author asserts that four-day workweek brings more free time and affords more activity for the worker. On the other hand, the professor rebuts this reason by thinking about the condition that may end by losing the job because the quantity of work will be decreased by four-day work in the weeks. Consequently, people can saw dramatically drop in life satisfaction.
In sum, the two perspectives differ in their approach. Controversial points are proposed by the professor which showed us that the policy must have more exact review.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...vides some evidence to refute them all. Fist of all, the author argues that decr...
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...roves unpleasant sense in the employee. Finally, the author asserts that four-da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22310756972 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70761028838 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609561752988 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.155703227 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6428571429 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257541439734 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744559922089 0.0996497079465 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686423532198 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11471647042 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506951367155 0.0443174109184 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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