tpo 12
The material discusses the concept of if the amateur sketch made by her sister Cassandra is the image of Jane Austen. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely Austen's family gave permission to use this picture for her letter. Next, the face in the portrait looks like one in Cassander's sketch. Finally, the style of portrait is to Humphrey, he was an active painter at the same time when Austen was a teenager.
Conversely, the reading challenges the points, one specific contradiction is the portrait used in 1882, when Austen had been dead 17 years ago; thus, no one of her family actually saw her, as a result they could not confirm that it was her picture. In addition to that, the Austen had an extended family, all her cousins were teenager sand resembled her. Therefore, this portrait might be for one of her relatives. One final point, there is a stamp at the back of the picture mean that it was sold by William lack, while William did not sell portrait in Londen when Austen was a teenager, but she was 27 years old, that is mean when the portrait was painted Austen was older than the person in the portrait.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ints outlined in the reading passage. Firstly, the reading details specific po...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...same time when Austen was a teenager. Conversely, the reading challenges the p...
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Line 5, column 711, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... older than the person in the portrait.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1373.03311258 78% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43916196902 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8195999267 49.2860985944 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 7.06452816374 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467680698177 0.272083759551 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199417068785 0.0996497079465 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954845762915 0.0662205650399 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319366867253 0.162205337803 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102828751228 0.0443174109184 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 53.8541721854 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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