TPO-18 - Integrated Writing Task
Both the reading and the lecture discuss the method to stop declinig of the Torreya tree. According to the article, the author provides three methods by which scientist would be able to control the extinction of Torreya, namely reestablish torreya in the same location which is flourished, plant torreya in different location named as a assistan migration, and preserve it in research center. On the contrary, all three method are rejected by professir in the lecture, Moreover, the profeesor says that non of three ways are a sastifaction solution and adds her points of view.
Firstly, the reading passage points out that by reestablishing the Torreya in its own location experts can stop its extiction. The lecturer, however, casts doubt on this claim by saying that this method is unlikely to be successful beacuse thenorthern part of Florida is strongly affected by changing in climate. Moreover, global warming increases the temperature in that region and makes the region a dryier site which unlikely to have a suitable condition for Toreyya to thrive. As a result, reestablishing the Torreya in its own location would not be a proper solution.
Secondly, the author claims that moving the Torreya into a new location which is defined as assisted migration result in helping Torreya to thrive in that condition. The professor, by contrast, refutes this method by providing an example of Black Local tree which was moved to north through assisted migration. This tree spread quickly in that region an consequently killed some natural tree which some of them are endager of extiction. Therefore, assisted migration may have a unpredicted outcome which is harmful for environment.
Finally, the article avers that preserving the Torreya tree in a research center help the tree to thrive because experts can protect and conduct reserch on it. The speaker, on the contrary, rejects this method by arguing that this method is not a proper solution and is not able to cure disease. additionally, the torreya tree is large genetically diverce species and the research centers have not enough capacity to place them. Furthermore, The research centers are no caple of finding diseases and solve them in long term.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... torreya in different location named as a assistan migration, and preserve it in ...
^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...This tree spread quickly in that region an consequently killed some natural tree w...
^^
Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... Therefore, assisted migration may have a unpredicted outcome which is harmful fo...
^
Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
...lution and is not able to cure disease. additionally, the torreya tree is large genetically ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.01324503311 379% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1373.03311258 135% => OK
No of words: 360.0 270.72406181 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75055549945 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 145.348785872 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508333333333 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 419.366225166 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2891958248 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 110.228320801 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06452816374 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383895337684 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129438592388 0.0996497079465 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887509763255 0.0662205650399 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238075553103 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380614212184 0.0443174109184 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 63.6247240618 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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