TPO 21 Integrated
The lecture and the passage are both about genetically modified trees. The author of the article feels that use of genetics and genetic modification tools will have advantages, however the lecturer challanges the claims asserted in the passage. The lecturer is on the opinion that genetically modified trees have more disadvantages.
To begin with, the author argues that these new generation of genetically modified trees are harder than the natural trees. In the article he emphasize the persistance of geneically trees in exposure to nature; for instance a new papaya tree specie could resist against a virus, named ring spot virus. On the other hand the lecturer oppoese this claim reseoning that these new modified trees are not resistant to the any changes in the nature, although thay may be better encountering with an especial virus or parasite. As she asserts the natural trees are more compatible to climate, water and environmental changes.
Secondly, the writer explain an economical justification to support the genetically modified trees. The article assume a large number of economic benefits for the farmer because of the growing acceleration in genetically modified trees. The lecturer however rebuts this by mentioning the point that the farmer have to pay every time for planting such trees and this not seem beneficial.
Finally, the passage suggusts such trees to prevent overexploitation of wil trees, because of vast of human demands to materials. In contrast, the lecturer's position is that the genetically modified trees will result in more damages to local areas and she anticipates that use of genetically modified trees eventually will crowd out the natural trees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ges the claims asserted in the passage. The lecturer is on the opinion that genetic...
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Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'emphasizes'.
Suggestion: emphasizes
...an the natural trees. In the article he emphasize the persistance of geneically trees in ...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'assumes'.
Suggestion: assumes
...genetically modified trees. The article assume a large number of economic benefits for...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ally modified trees. The article assume a large number of economic benefits for the farmer becaus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, second, secondly, for instance, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 268.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37686567164 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84637421636 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3012655457 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.499645478164 0.272083759551 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204274395267 0.0996497079465 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771688646918 0.0662205650399 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323928064689 0.162205337803 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254314763406 0.0443174109184 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.3589403974 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.8541721854 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.0289183223 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 63.6247240618 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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