tpo 27
Both the reading and listening parts offer two opposite views about the causes of the Little Ice Age. While the passage lists three possible factors for this incidence; the professor, on the other hand, casts doubts on the accuracy of these factors by referring to the most updated information.
First of all, the article referred to the cooling caused by disrupted gulf currents as one of the feasible reason for this event; on the contrary, the lecturer refutes the validity of this factor. As he explains, this factor is accountable at the northern hemisphere in places such as North America and Europe; nevertheless, the identical event has also occurred in New Zealand and South Africa which are located in the southern hemisphere. As long as this factor cannot explain the occurrence of the Ice Age at the southern hemisphere, it cannot be the cogent cause of the Ice Age.
Secondly, meanwhile, the text stated that the dust and dark cloud caused by the volcanic eruption is also another factor of the Little Ice Age; the instructor, disapproves the accuracy of this factor too. According to his description, the dust released by the volcanic eruption can be responsible for this event if it would be in the massive volume. Furthermore, this huge amount of dust is also possessed the visual effects such as the colorful sunset or sunrise. Since there is no record about these types of visual alteration from that period, the volcanic eruption is not that much severe to be accountable for this Little Ice Age.
Finally, the passage asserts that the decrement of the human population on that duration is the third reason of the ice age since by the decline of population, trees had replaced the crops and earth became cooler. In contrast, the professor challenges the logic of this factor too. Based on his assertation, the low population size was not continued for long enough duration to lead this event. The population was recovered so quickly, and all forests with trees were converted to the cultivated lands for agriculture purpose. Thus, this period was not that much long enough to lead the decrement of temperature and the Little Ice Age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Both the reading and listening parts off...
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...ing to the most updated information. First of all, the article referred to th...
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...t be the cogent cause of the Ice Age. Secondly, meanwhile, the text stated tha...
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... accountable for this Little Ice Age. Finally, the passage asserts that the de...
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...f temperature and the Little Ice Age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, third, thus, while, in contrast, such as, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.01324503311 339% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1373.03311258 131% => OK
No of words: 364.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9478021978 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61799781722 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513736263736 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 419.366225166 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2757753954 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.642857143 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7857142857 7.06452816374 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340754836566 0.272083759551 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128315281289 0.0996497079465 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854743968387 0.0662205650399 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207706643211 0.162205337803 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469644242217 0.0443174109184 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 63.6247240618 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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