tpo 29 edmontosaurus migrated to the south every winter
The material discusses that edmontosaurus immigrated every winter from The North slope to the south in order to survive. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
First, the author mentions that edmontosaurus' diet provides evidence that they should migrate south to get enough food. On the other hand, the professor opposes this and states that edmontosaurus did not have to migrate to get food. The lecturer explains that, in the past, the North slope was warmer than it is today. furthermore, the speaker adds that the sun shined along twenty-four hours during the peak summer, which gave a perfect condition to grow a sufficient amount of plants. The listening points out that even if these plants died in the winter, edmontosaurus could live on this abundance died vegetations.
Second, the reading states that edmontosaurus lived in herds, which helped them to migrate. On the contrary, the professor challenges this and contends that living in herds does not mean that they could migrate. The professor adds that edmontosaurus might live in herds for other reasons, such as providing extra protection against predators. The lecturer mentions that other animals as rosevale elk live in herds and do not migrate.
Third, the reading posits that the physical features of edmontosaurus allowed them to migrated. Conversely, the lecturer refutes this and states that the juvenile edmontosaurus were not able to perform this journey. The professor adds that of young edmontosaurus immigrated with adults, they might slow the herds. In addition to that, adult edmontosaurus could not leave their youngs alone since they could not survive on their own. The lecturer concludes that edmontosaurus should stay where their youngs were and survived on the North slope.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...orth slope was warmer than it is today. furthermore, the speaker adds that the sun shined a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, third, while, in addition, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 294.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3231292517 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74223922691 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517006802721 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 419.366225166 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.23620309051 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9683343071 49.2860985944 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06452816374 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210745061058 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707750962045 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345029893318 0.0662205650399 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124569949059 0.162205337803 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405831769995 0.0443174109184 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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