TPO 31 integrated writing
The article states that the Sinosauropte is not a feathered dinosaur and provides three main reasons of support. However, the professor in rhe lecture explains that based on evidences we can consider this dinosour as a feathered dinosour and refutes each of reasons that states in the reading.
first, the reading states that there is a possiblity that the fine lines are not functional structures belonging to a living dinosaur. the text says taht maby these lines had formed after animal died. The professor refutes this point by beast is a feathered animal.stating that analysis of the cites that fossils are burried there revealed that this
Second, the article claims that even these lines are remain of real structures we can not be sure of the truth of dionosut structure. however, the man in the lecture illusrates that feathers have a chemical compund that named beta caroten. this compound does not excist in frills. so, based on experiments in composition remaining from beast this animal is feathered animal.
Third, the reading tells that usual function of feathers are for helping animals fly or regulate their body temperature. But, the conversation rejects this point by demonstrating that sometimes feathers are essential for attracting mates. Also, experiment and analysis reveald colorful structures of fossil. These orange and white colors shows that mating idea is strong.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...of reasons that states in the reading. first, the reading states that there is a pos...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...uctures belonging to a living dinosaur. the text says taht maby these lines had for...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ils are burried there revealed that this Second, the article claims that even the...
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Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...rticle claims that even these lines are remain of real structures we can not be sure o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...ure of the truth of dionosut structure. however, the man in the lecture illusrates that...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...emical compund that named beta caroten. this compound does not excist in frills. so,...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...his compound does not excist in frills. so, based on experiments in composition re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 30.3222958057 66% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 223.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26457399103 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68896064693 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578475336323 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.4545946179 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8333333333 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301194889724 0.272083759551 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10181792051 0.0996497079465 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729710444598 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17780414134 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827402274842 0.0443174109184 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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