Tpo 42
In term of how we can prevent birds from striking to the glass of a building, the lecturer and the author contradict each other. The author in the article, suggest some solutions to prevent injuries to a bird, on the contrary, the professor in the lecture, refute each solution and states that these tips are not effective.
Firstly, The author claims that one solution is to use one-way glass which, is transparent in the only one direction, in contrast, the professor asserts that this action has some problems because one direction windows play the role as a mirror, therefore, birds cannot distinguish the mirror and they see the tree and other material in that window and fly throw of them. Thus this solution is not very good.
secondly, the reading states another way to make a safe window is using colorful and pattern designs. these patterns painted over the glass and let people still see them out but, help birds to avoid trying to fly and meet with the window. on the contrary, the lecturer cast doubt to this point and claims that pattern has some problems because from the birds perspective these patterns are like the hole. as a result, they probably fly into the hole. moreover, if we can use this solution the stript lines should be very small and narrow hence, inside the building be very dark and it is a negative point for architecture.
Finally, the article asserts that the third solution is to create an artificial magnetic field in the windows. Due to research birds have natural ability to sense the magnetic field, therefore, this way can prevent them from colliding with the windows. in contrast, the speaker in the lecture refuse this way and states that magnetic ability only works on birds for long distance travel for instance, when the bird wants to travel from cold place to warm place, so, in this situation, the magnetic field doesn't work and birds using their eye for short distance. Thus, this solution is not effective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...blems because one direction windows play the role as a mirror, therefore, birds c...
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Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...l in that window and fly throw of them. Thus this solution is not very good. second...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
.... Thus this solution is not very good. secondly, the reading states another way to make...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... is using colorful and pattern designs. these patterns painted over the glass and let...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...trying to fly and meet with the window. on the contrary, the lecturer cast doubt t...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...tern has some problems because from the birds perspective these patterns are like the...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ctive these patterns are like the hole. as a result, they probably fly into the ho...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...esult, they probably fly into the hole. moreover, if we can use this solution the stript...
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Line 4, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...t them from colliding with the windows. in contrast, the speaker in the lecture re...
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Line 4, column 504, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., in this situation, the magnetic field doesnt work and birds using their eye for shor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thus, for instance, in contrast, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1373.03311258 118% => OK
No of words: 339.0 270.72406181 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78466076696 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34652191652 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 145.348785872 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501474926254 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 419.366225166 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.254812424 49.2860985944 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.769230769 110.228320801 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06452816374 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462927897464 0.272083759551 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149495846672 0.0996497079465 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822216187306 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267893501746 0.162205337803 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447081256765 0.0443174109184 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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