TPO 50
In this set of materials, bothe the lecturer and the reading passage discuss the possibility of sending human being to Mars. The reading passage firmly states that sending human to Mars would need to solve some problems which is virtually impossible with current technology. However, the professor mentions that the travel to the moon is really challenging but there are some possible solutions for the problems which have claims in the text.
Firstly, the article contends that a round-trip to the moon lasts roughly 2 years, thus the astronauts needs a huge amount of food, water, and oxygen which is impossible to carry. On the other hand, the professor articulates that the astronauts can utilize a process which is famed as hydropanic. In this process plants have been grown in the water rather than soil. In this situation, the waste water will be converted to clean water which is drinkable; besides, the level of carbon dioxide in the spaceship will decreased.
In addition, the essay alleges that in this long trip the astronauts will be in the zero-gravity environment constantly which have severe repercussions such as deacreasing muscle mass and lowering bone density. Nevertheless, the lecturer avers that a lot of astronauts have been in the station that orbiting around the earh for decades. Thus, they have never faced serious damages. Several technics have been developed so far, which the astronauts can be healthy by regular exercising. Also, the astronauts can use some vitamins and minerals such as calcium to avoid lowering density.
Eventually, the reading passage asserts that the astronauts in the Mars' trip would be faced with dangerous levels of space radiation and making a protecting shield is impossible due to weight issues. On the contrary, the professor declares the radiation level is always not in the dangerous limit. Therefore, it is possible to make a equipment which monitors the level of the radiation and the dangerous level the astronauts use an equipment for their protection.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
...of carbon dioxide in the spaceship will decreased. In addition, the essay alleges th...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e in the spaceship will decreased. In addition, the essay alleges that in thi...
^^
Line 13, column 333, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...imit. Therefore, it is possible to make a equipment which monitors the level of t...
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Line 13, column 430, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'equipment'.
Suggestion: equipment
... the dangerous level the astronauts use an equipment for their protection.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1373.03311258 125% => OK
No of words: 328.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21341463415 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74066034751 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515243902439 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 419.366225166 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6667153284 49.2860985944 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06452816374 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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