TPO INTEGRATED 1

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TPO INTEGRATED 1

The passage proposes an optional four days a week for the workers but the lecturer totally opposed the idea. 
 
First, in the reading, four days a week will make the employees rested and more efficient. Others will be hired to fill the gap. This will reduce the errors they commit on their daily basis and will result in higher profits for the companies. The lecturer argues the companies will not hire new employees because the cost of production increases as they need more space to work, more computers and training. Moreover, no matter how much the employees work, medical benefits should be available for them. 
 
Second, the passage implies as the current employees work less, new jobs will be available and the unemployment rate decreases. But the lecturer believes the increase in cost of production mentioned above will compel the companies not to hire more. They may force their employees to work overtime or expect them to finish their work in just four days instead. The overload creates unpleasant environment for the workers.
 
Finally, in the passage the workers will have more free time to spend with their families or leisure activities. However, the lecturer asserted that times of recession, they will be more likely to lose their jobs and less likely to be promoted for managerial positions because more committed employees are considered first.
 

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t the lecturer totally opposed the idea.    First, in the reading, four days a week ...
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...l benefits should be available for them.    Second, the passage implies as the curre...
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...npleasant environment for the workers.   Finally, in the passage the workers will...
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...mitted employees are considered first.  
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, may, moreover, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 228.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10087719298 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5587698248 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 145.348785872 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548245614035 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6502128494 49.2860985944 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.222222222 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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