TPO13
The reading states that since the sale of fossils especially dinosour and large vertebrate become a big business, scientist and general pubilc take miss their chance to view this fossils and because of that, public interest in fossils is decreased. However, the professor states that this big business has more advantages which outweigh it disadvantages.
First, based on the reading, collectors of fossils pay a lot of money for purchasing a them and universities and museums can not afford this amount of money. In the contrast, the author explains that collectore spend a lot of money on finding fosslils. Many of these fossils' price are low level and any museums can buy them and show it to the public.
Second, the passage asserts that scientist do not have access to vital and important fossils. These fossiles have a lot of important information and it is possible for scientist to make a disvorey based on them. Nevertheless, the lecturer explain that private collector do not know which fossils is important. Therefore, they can not put price on them. When private collectors gain a fossil, they call an expert which is a scientist to exam these fossils. Therefore, the scientist who use examination on these fossils, obtain many information or on the other hand scientist will not miss the information.
Third, according to the reading, most commercial who find the fossils, do not pay attention to the exact position of them. The position of fossils are important to scientist since they can learn about these fossils by observing the exact position. on the contrery, the professor demonstrate that it is true that commercial do not pay attention to the position of fossils and it damage scientist, but because of commercial many of the current fossils are discovered. If it was not for them many other fossils would be undiscovered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...l pubilc take miss their chance to view this fossils and because of that, public int...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'them'?
Suggestion: a; them
...ssils pay a lot of money for purchasing a them and universities and museums can not af...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...se examination on these fossils, obtain many information or on the other hand scient...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...se examination on these fossils, obtain many information or on the other hand scientist will not...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ossils by observing the exact position. on the contrery, the professor demonstrate...
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Line 7, column 379, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'damages'?
Suggestion: damages
...ntion to the position of fossils and it damage scientist, but because of commercial ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, third, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1373.03311258 112% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02931596091 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79832430081 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 145.348785872 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478827361564 0.540411800872 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 419.366225166 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7419236854 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.933333333 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565348754111 0.272083759551 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200094271465 0.0996497079465 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110243583473 0.0662205650399 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348488643956 0.162205337803 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720233123382 0.0443174109184 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.