TPO15
The lecture and the article are both about the ways to stop the spread of cane toads. The article fells that cane toads are an important danger for the Australian environment and proposed three manners to limit their population. The lecturer challenges the claim made by the article, He believes that these ways are faulty.
To begin with, the writer states that the national fence is very practical to limit the cane toad access to the vast Australian nature. The specific argument is challenged by the lecture. He claims that the national fence cannot prevent the cane toads, because the young toads and the eggs of cane toads exist near the streams and the rivers. Therefore, the rivers and the streams can be carried by the water fellow to the other area among fences. In conclusion, the fences are not functional.
Secondly, the author suggests that toads can be captured and destroyed by the haunters and volunteers. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that the volunteers are not educated to distinguish the differences between frogs and cane toads. Therefore, local people may be destroyed frogs which are very essential for the Australian environment instead of cane toads.
Last but not least, the article posits that the government employs some researchers to developing some especial viruses which are harmful to the cane toads and can kill them. In contrast, the lecturer position is that these kinds of viruses can be harmful to all of the cane toads in the world like American cane toads. The cane toads can be carried by the researchers and by pets collectors to America and the virus can kill all the American cane toads. This issue is a disaster for the ecosystem because canes are the vide part of the American environment and ecosystem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 230, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hree manners to limit their population. The lecturer challenges the claim made by t...
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Line 13, column 260, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...hese kinds of viruses can be harmful to all of the cane toads in the world like American c...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 299.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98996655518 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5225152501 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468227424749 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 419.366225166 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.568150547 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427927932385 0.272083759551 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146543772304 0.0996497079465 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102711590112 0.0662205650399 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259952594346 0.162205337803 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708932374819 0.0443174109184 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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