Tpo25- integrated writing

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Tpo25- integrated writing

The reading discusses the reasons which disapproved the possibility of producing electric batterries by ancient people. First, the author states that the clays, found in Iraq, contain a copper cylinder around an iron rod which can represents that they were used to produce an elecrtric battery. The speaker expresses that it may be true that they weren't utilized for producing batteries, but the agreements described in the passage aren't valuable and convincing.

first of all, the article doesn't mention a considerable and determinig point. The lecturer points out that the clays found by local people not by the archaeologists, and they found other materials except the clay. So they maybe found something like metal wires but they threw them out. that's why the speaker believes that the first reason given by the author isn't pursuasive.

Furthermore, according to the article, some copper cylinders discovered in an antientcity near to the place where clays found that were used for holding scrolls. The speaker says it is true, but it isn't the sign of approving anything. She mentions that they maybe used for holding scroll at the first, but they adapted for another purpose.

Finally, the speaker says on the basis of magical power which ancient people had, and the ability of reliefing pain by utilizing batteries can answer the question asked in the passage. that's how the lecturer contracts the last agreement mentioned in the reading.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'represent'
Suggestion: represent
...r cylinder around an iron rod which can represents that they were used to produce an elecr...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to producing'.
Suggestion: used to producing
...rod which can represents that they were used to produce an elecrtric battery. The speaker expre...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: weren't
...expresses that it may be true that they werent utilized for producing batteries, but t...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 433, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...the agreements described in the passage arent valuable and convincing. first of all...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...assage arent valuable and convincing. first of all, the article doesnt mention a co...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...convincing. first of all, the article doesnt mention a considerable and determinig p...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thats
...ke metal wires but they threw them out. thats why the speaker believes that the first...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ke metal wires but they threw them out. thats why the speaker believes that the first...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...at the first reason given by the author isnt pursuasive. Furthermore, according to...
^^^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ls. The speaker says it is true, but it isnt the sign of approving anything. She men...
^^^^
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thats
...swer the question asked in the passage. thats how the lecturer contracts the last agr...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...swer the question asked in the passage. thats how the lecturer contracts the last agr...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, may, so, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17446808511 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59593999963 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5728944813 49.2860985944 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290100128357 0.272083759551 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930046539865 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865208697576 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164215404244 0.162205337803 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848379812859 0.0443174109184 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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