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The reading states three solutions which help birds to distinguish between glass and open air. However, the professor states that none of the author's solutions are effectively help birds. He refutes each of author's solution.
First, the reading passage claims that businesses can use one-way Glass instead of regular clear glass. However, the professor opposes this point by saying that if one bird is on the outside of the glass, the One-Way Glass reflect just as a mirror, and also the One-Way Glass may reflect the sky or trees, as the bird don't understand the mirror so it got problems for the birds.
Second, the passage posits that colorful design can be effective for birds to distinguish the glass. While, the professor refutes this solution again and he says that it has problem. According to the professor, the birds perceive opening as open hole therefor it can injure them.
Third, the reading states an artificial Magnetic-Field to guide birds from buildings as a solution. The professor opposes this point again by explaining that this artificial Magnetic-Field can be effective for traveling long distance, for example when birds migrate from a cold place to a warm place after winter, but it doesn't work for short traveling, for instance traveling from a place in city to another place in the city. He explains that in short travelling birds use brightness of light so it can't be effective.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'helped'.
Suggestion: helped
...f the authors solutions are effectively help birds. He refutes each of authors solut...
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Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y reflect the sky or trees, as the bird dont understand the mirror so it got problem...
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Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ce to a warm place after winter, but it doesnt work for short traveling, for instance ...
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Line 4, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from a place in city to another place in the city. He explains that in short trav...
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Line 4, column 503, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ing birds use brightness of light so it cant be effective.
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Line 4, column 503, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...ing birds use brightness of light so it cant be effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 235.0 270.72406181 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0085106383 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61407549136 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527659574468 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.7810987824 49.2860985944 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06452816374 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401519444891 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158786447063 0.0996497079465 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10340228374 0.0662205650399 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242801226048 0.162205337803 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687475172428 0.0443174109184 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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