TPO42- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
In today’s world, there is a lot of tasks and jobs to do. Recently, there has been a hot debate on very notion that whether performing various type of tasks are well-enough and more satisfied for worker or accomplishing a similar task during the whole has tremendous effect on them. As far as I am concerned, I am holding the opinion that doing different kinds of jobs are better for workers. On the countless reasons and examples, I will present the most essential and conspicuous ones here.
To begin with, by doing different kinds of works, during workday, laborers could achieve a lot experience is different fields. But with doing repetitive thing all day long they can be expert just on single with, and it don’t work in today's community. My personal experience is compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I has been working in different firms such as software developing companies or electrical circuit producing enterprises and ect... As a result, I had gained a lot of precious experience through this works. My cousin, on the other hand, he worked just in one field and gained experience that was related to that job. The time passed away, the world economy become sophisticated and unreliable. Everyone have been losing their job, the jobs that one day they were expert on that. Unfortunately some of them didn't have other skill to work in other job. My cousin was one of them. He hadn’t other skill to rely on that and find another work. In contrast, I has gained lot of experience in different jobs, so I found another job quickly.
Last but not least, the other reason for performing different type of work is that workers don't get bored while doing work and keep them happy. But if they do same work all workdays, they get bored and tired and even depressed. For instance, my uncle had an ordinary job in government facility. He typed the letter in the computer and organized them based on the type of the letter. He has been working since 1980.every they he did the same thing.as a result, when he got retired, he was depressed and unsatisfied. He always said that I waste my whole life and he was not happy. Consequently; he got sick because of depression and died.
In conclusion, having considered the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I do believe that working on different types of task during workday is more beneficial and satisfactory for workers. Not only they achieve more experience, but also they become happy and don’t tired.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 340, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e of this. When I was in high school, I has been working in different firms such as...
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Line 7, column 843, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ert on that. Unfortunately some of them didnt have other skill to work in other job. ...
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Line 7, column 996, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...t and find another work. In contrast, I has gained lot of experience in different j...
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Line 13, column 92, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... different type of work is that workers dont get bored while doing work and keep the...
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Line 13, column 516, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ired, he was depressed and unsatisfied. He always said that I waste my whole life ...
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Line 13, column 580, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...ste my whole life and he was not happy. Consequently; he got sick because of depression and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 7.30242825607 342% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 22.412803532 228% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1373.03311258 153% => OK
No of words: 433.0 270.72406181 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84064665127 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72390662233 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 145.348785872 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517321016166 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 419.366225166 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 3.25607064018 553% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 13.0662251656 191% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3368900566 49.2860985944 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.84 110.228320801 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.32 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900757352052 0.272083759551 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285664399658 0.0996497079465 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021599599776 0.0662205650399 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555505564226 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020015729937 0.0443174109184 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.2367328918 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 63.6247240618 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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