TPO52-Integrated-Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars, some think that sending people to an asteroid would actually be the best colonization option for a number of reasons. Low Gravity To begin with, asteroids are often much smaller than planets, so they have lower gravity. When landing a spaceship, the craft would not be pulled as strongly or as forcefully toward the asteroid's surface, making the landing safer than landing on the Moon or Mars; it would also allow a spacecraft to carry much more equipment needed to set up the colony. It would also be easier for the spacecraft to take off again, so the spaceship would need to carry considerably less fuel for the trip back to Earth. Mining Valuable Metals Next some asteroids are rich in valuable elements and precious metals that are relatively rare on Earth, such as gold and platinum. An asteroid colony would be extremely profitable and a good source of these raw materials. The colonists or businesses sponsoring them could more than pay for the cost of their support by mining minerals and sending them back to Earth. Easy to Reach Finally, asteroids are a good option for colonization because some of them would be very easy to reach. There are a number of asteroids that periodically come within or near Earth's orbit Some of them actually get closer to Earth than our Moon. So these asteroids would be much easier and more affordable to get to and get back from than a planet like Mars, which would require a two-year trip in each direction.
The article states that sending human to asterois would be a good colonization option and provides three reasons of support. however, the professor explains that this is not a good idea and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that having low gravity is making the landing on asteroids more safer than landing on the Moon or Mars. The professor refutes this point by stating that low gravity will present certain risks, such as losing muscle mass or bone density. it may be suffering in a short time but it can hurt for longevity.
Second, the article claims that some asteroids are rich in Mining Valuable Metals that are rare on earth. The colonies and businesses sponsering them could take lucrative of sending them to earth. however, the professor contends that it is not the whole picture. cost of excavating them is much high, so that it will reduce its profit. The higher that costs of its supplies, the lower its market price.
Third, the reading avers that some of the steroids are easy to reach, so that they are a good option for colonization. The lecture opposes this point by saying that if it is be easy to reach, but it is not easy to be return. The orbit of asteroids can be unusual. if the distance may be not much farther, it would be challenging.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
... and provides three reasons of support. however, the professor explains that this is no...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...vity is making the landing on asteroids more safer than landing on the Moon or Mars. The p...
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Suggestion: It
... as losing muscle mass or bone density. it may be suffering in a short time but it...
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Suggestion: However
...ake lucrative of sending them to earth. however, the professor contends that it is not ...
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Suggestion: Cost
...tends that it is not the whole picture. cost of excavating them is much high, so tha...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ice. Third, the reading avers that some of the steroids are easy to reach, so that the...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...oses this point by saying that if it is be easy to reach, but it is not easy to be...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... The orbit of asteroids can be unusual. if the distance may be not much farther, i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 22.412803532 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 1373.03311258 79% => OK
No of words: 230.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39272684963 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2940103274 49.2860985944 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2142857143 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0518879272301 0.272083759551 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189446120694 0.0996497079465 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0260075521085 0.0662205650399 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0306317437615 0.162205337803 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00589879473379 0.0443174109184 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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