Humans are not like machines. They needs leisure and break from their everyday chores. Some prefer to spend their leisure with family other prefer to travel around the globe. While traveling people either prefer tourist areas or cultural sites. Personally, I prefer to visit cultural places because I fell like cultures make us understand ourselves more.
First, it is human nature that people would flow after the trend. It means most people love travelling trending places. These trending place are always attraction for most tourists. So, it is unlikely to get any privacy. On the contrary, cultural places are calm and less trendy. So, they provide us with required privacy. This privacy makes our visit more convenient. For example, If you are to visit beautiful cities of Nepal, say Pokhara, you would need to compete with other fellow tourist for accommodations, hospitality and other basic requirement. But, if you visit some cultural home stays, you would get ample space and privacy required.
Second, Cultures tingles us with history. By studying culture we can understand us much better. As cultures are our identity, it helps to reflect our ancient past. This reflection motivates human to do better and be better. However, travelling to tourist areas are just throwing away money for intrinsic amusements. They provide us with no knowledge instead just sucks our money. For example, travelling to Amusement Park in London would only be for fun but travelling Art History Museum of London would freshen ones mind as well as attracts us to history. It helps us to know us better. Peace and calmness in mind originates autonomously within us.
Finally, Cultural areas are gregarious. They are friendly and commutable. People are soft hearted and down to earth. On the contrary, tourist areas are hostile. Business grows there and people are concerned only of wealth so leach out money from us. In addition, travelling to cultural areas helps us to communicate with new people. It aids in exchanging ideas as well as cultural beliefs. This cultural beliefs of locals would make us feel welcomed. On the other hand, tourism area are hostile. People poorly communicate with one another and are less concerned of others. For instance, the country like Nepal, Bhutan and Cambodia are famous for hospitable people. It is because these countries are cultural by root and governed by social norms. Thus, it has installed kindness, respectfulness and sincerity within veins of these people.
Therefore, visiting cultural areas to calm ones mind is better. Naturalness is prominent in cultural sites but tourist sites are filled with pretentiousness and fakeness. There is drastic drift in people's behavior in these areas. Cultural areas are less spoilt by greed of profit. They are governed by cultural values and norms. In addition, cultural areas also makes us closer to our ancestors and aids us in remembering our roots. Thus, visiting cultural areas not only aids our psychological wellness but also our mental awareness.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
Humans are not like machines. They needs leisure and break from their everyday c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 10.4613686534 249% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 22.412803532 236% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 30.3222958057 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2543.0 1373.03311258 185% => OK
No of words: 490.0 270.72406181 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18979591837 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.04702891845 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61403398555 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 145.348785872 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495918367347 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 803.7 419.366225166 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 3.25607064018 614% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 43.0 13.0662251656 329% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 21.2450331126 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6160780162 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1395348837 110.228320801 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3953488372 21.698381199 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.06976744186 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 4.33554083885 577% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.27373068433 351% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192522701269 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482767479626 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489020775448 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131328696403 0.162205337803 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767482899516 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.3589403974 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 53.8541721854 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 63.6247240618 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.7273730684 37% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.498013245 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
Humans are not like machines. They needs leisure and break from their everyday c...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 10.4613686534 249% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 7.30242825607 274% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 22.412803532 236% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 30.3222958057 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2543.0 1373.03311258 185% => OK
No of words: 490.0 270.72406181 181% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18979591837 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.04702891845 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61403398555 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 145.348785872 167% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495918367347 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 803.7 419.366225166 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 3.25607064018 614% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 43.0 13.0662251656 329% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 11.0 21.2450331126 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6160780162 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1395348837 110.228320801 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.3953488372 21.698381199 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.06976744186 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 4.33554083885 577% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.27373068433 351% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192522701269 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482767479626 0.0996497079465 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489020775448 0.0662205650399 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131328696403 0.162205337803 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767482899516 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.3589403974 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 53.8541721854 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.64 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 63.6247240618 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.7273730684 37% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.498013245 61% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.