You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter
- Give your reasons for wanting the job
- Explain why you think you can do the job
- Describe any relevant experience you have
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to show my keen interest in the the position of tour guide as advertised in the local newspaper.
To elucidate I am keen on this role as this is a weekend job and additionally I would like to earn some extra money as I am going through a difficult financial situation. Apart from this I have a Master’s degree in tourism management and around five years of experience taking domestic and international tourists for sight-seeing around our city so I believe that this experience will enable me to do this job.
I am presently working as a tour guide with Marker travels which are one of the famous tour and travel companies in our city and I specialize in handling large groups of foreign visitors as well as domestic visitors and taking them to tourist spots around our city.
I hope you give a due consideration to my application.
Yours sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...n reference to show my keen interest in the the position of tour guide as advertised in...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...n reference to show my keen interest in the the position of tour guide as advertised in...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72327044025 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91411549923 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.2157906848 44.8134815571 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215756666337 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949772472599 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0210780519263 0.0603063233224 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107973848133 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146220808047 0.0580467560999 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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