TOPIC # 45 Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night?
There is an old saying in English that the early bird catches the worm. However, depending on the inheritance or some earned habits, some people naturally function more effectively during nights. Unlike them, I personally work better by day, and I love to get up at dawn and start my job as soon as possible on the following grounds;
First, I feel more energetic and productive when I get up early. There is something strange about the morning’s air that refreshes me and makes me feel more alive. Meanwhile, early in the morning, I am more focused on my job no matter what kind of job it is, an...
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The introduction is just
The introduction is just great!
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 354 350
No. of Characters: 1586 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.338 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.48 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.428 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 95 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.379 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.622 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
I doubt whether the saying in the introduction suits the whole essay or not?!
Thanks again for your help and hard work