GIVING BASIC KNOWLEDGE ABOUT PREPARING EXAM
Hi, I’m Sangeeth studying from China Medical University 2015 batch.
I passed the Foreign medical graduation exam (FMGE) in my first attempt and scored 191/300. my preparation time was around 107 days.
KEY POINTS ( Based on my personal experience )
- DON’T RELY on Too many sources for your NOTES
- DON’T LEAVE ANY SUBJECT - Learn the CONCEPTS and get an IDEA of HIGH YIELD topics at least.
(DMA MADE LIST OF HIGH YIELD TOPICS IT HELPED ME A LOT IN PREPARATION https://dmaedu.com/fmge-high-yield-subjects-and-chapters/)
- DON’T ATTEMPT complete mocks so early or so late - Start giving complete mocks before 10 days of your EXAM and attempt at least 5 complete mocks just like the exam scenario.
- DON’T underestimate ONE LINER - although it is not asked directly in the exam, it helps to have a quick revision of all the subjects.
- ONE REVISION IS NEVER ENOUGH (At least 2 revision must, but if you have enough time to revise 3 times, you are good to go)
- FINAL REVISION keeps these subjects in the last row ( ANAT, BIOCHEM, PSM, MICRO, PHARMA, FSM) few days before your exam, these subjects are hard to retain so make them sit in your short term memory.
- As Sakshi Arora mam said in one of her videos,
You don’t need to be Master of a Subject, Be an Ace of all subjects
MY SOURCES
1)MIST NOTES (COVER TO COVER),MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS
ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS.
2)MIST NOTES - (IMP TOPICS),MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS
MICRO,PSM
3)PREPLADDER NOTES - (IMP TOPICS),MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS
PHARMA,OPTHA
4)MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS
ALL SHORT SUBJECTS
I NEVER TOUCHED MEDICINE
TEST SOURCES
1)FMGE SOLUTIONS SUBJECT WISE(WITH EXPLANATIONS)
2)PREPLADDER CHAMPIONSHIP COMPLETE MOCKS (1-4)
3)FMGE SOLUTION COMPLETE MOCKS (2)
4)MIST COMPLETE MOCKS (2)
BEFORE APPEARING TO EXAM
I COMPLETED 9 subjects (CTC) MIST notes and important topics of 4 subjects
MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL SUBJECTS AND 8 COMPLETE MOCKS.
I would like to share the strategy & timeline of my preparation, I believe it would help some for planning their preparation.
I joined the MIST vacation batch in January and attended a few subjects. But I was not serious about my preparation, then corona made us all stay at home and I decided to appear in December Fmge 2020 and took a long break from studies.
But my friends suggested giving an attempt for JUNE FMGE 2020 and then I started my actual preparation on 16 May 2020.
As I started my preparation very late, my idea was to cover at least 13 subjects(MIST NOTES).
I Planned a maximum of 7 days for big subjects,
1) 4 days to study the notes once
2) 1 day to revise the notes
3) 2 days to do FMGE solutions with explanations.
As I mentioned earlier, I can only finish 9 subject’s Mist notes (cover to cover) and important topics from PSM, PHARMA, MICRO, OPTHA.
Revision is the key for this Exam,
I managed to finish my second revision on 2nd august and had 29 days for my final revision.
On my final revision, I spent most of my time concentrating on One-liners and Complete mock tests. But the bitter truth is whatever we prepared, Fmge June 2020 is one of the hardest papers, and 95% questions are clinical.
I and most felt it is impossible to pass this attempt. I left the exam center with the mindset to prepare for my next attempt.
Questions where too large and it felt so hard to manage time.
I felt it is practically impossible to read and understand every word of the question, so I followed the skimming technique (Quickly reading the question and just picked a few important points)
so I had at least 35 minutes in both parts 1&2 of the exam and it was more than enough to recheck all my answers and to make corrections.
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- Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits To what extent do you agree 61
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- in the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want in online without paying to what extent do you agree or disagree to that statement 78
- The below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 82
- the diagram shows the manufacturing process of sugar from sugar cane summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where possible 64
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...OURCES 1MIST NOTES COVER TO COVER,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,...
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...IST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. ...
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...S + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES -...
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...LUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TO...
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...TOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ON...
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...GERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM ...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...NT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDE...
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Suggestion: , PSM
...,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ON...
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Suggestion: , MIST
...ICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPT...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...SM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST O...
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Suggestion: , OPTHA
...MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ALL...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...S + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ALL SHORT SUBJECTS ...
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...notes and important topics of 4 subjects MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL ...
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Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...d important topics of 4 subjects MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL SUBJECTS AND 8 ...
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... topics from PSM, PHARMA, MICRO, OPTHA. Revision is the key for this Exam, I ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3139.0 1615.20841683 194% => OK
No of words: 636.0 315.596192385 202% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93553459119 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02185627292 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84355380152 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 176.041082164 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481132075472 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.9 506.74238477 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 5.43587174349 386% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.614479031 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.47826087 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.652173913 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.34782608696 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 41.0 4.38176352705 936% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955821056625 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034491952453 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432481495889 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0228777144578 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396504394189 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... time was around 107 days. KEY POINTS Based on my personal experience - DON’...
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... POINTS Based on my personal experience - DON’T RELY on Too many sources for you...
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...ION keeps these subjects in the last row ANAT, BIOCHEM, PSM, MICRO, PHARMA, FSM f...
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... MY SOURCES 1MIST NOTES COVER TO COVER,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PH...
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Line 16, column 33, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...OURCES 1MIST NOTES COVER TO COVER,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,...
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...LUTIONS ANATOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TO...
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...TOMY,PHYSIO,PATHO,BIOCHEM,FM,OBG,SURGERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ON...
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...GERY,ENT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM ...
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Line 18, column 31, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...NT,PEDS. 2MIST NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDE...
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Suggestion: , PSM
...,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS MICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ON...
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Suggestion: , MIST
...ICRO,PSM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPT...
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Line 20, column 37, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...SM 3PREPLADDER NOTES - IMP TOPICS,MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST O...
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Line 21, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , OPTHA
...MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ALL...
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Line 22, column 7, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...S + FMGE SOLUTIONS PHARMA,OPTHA 4MIST ONE LINERS + FMGE SOLUTIONS ALL SHORT SUBJECTS ...
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...ORT SUBJECTS I NEVER TOUCHED MEDICINE TEST SOURCES 1FMGE SOLUTIONS SUBJECT WI...
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Line 33, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...LETE MOCKS 2 BEFORE APPEARING TO EXAM I COMPLETED 9 subjects CTC MIST notes an...
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Line 34, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...notes and important topics of 4 subjects MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL ...
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Line 35, column 6, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'ONE liner', 'a liner', or simply 'LINERS'?
Suggestion: ONE liner; A liner; LINERS
...d important topics of 4 subjects MIST ONE LINERS +FMGE SOLUTIONS FOR ALL SUBJECTS AND 8 ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 49, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... topics from PSM, PHARMA, MICRO, OPTHA. Revision is the key for this Exam, I ma...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3139.0 1615.20841683 194% => OK
No of words: 636.0 315.596192385 202% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93553459119 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02185627292 4.20363070211 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.84355380152 2.80592935109 137% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 176.041082164 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481132075472 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 900.9 506.74238477 178% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 5.43587174349 386% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.614479031 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.47826087 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.652173913 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.34782608696 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 41.0 4.38176352705 936% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955821056625 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034491952453 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432481495889 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0228777144578 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396504394189 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.