1)Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are role models for youngsters. Do u support it
or not? (Agree/Disagree)
Its widely believed that sports stars or film stars are role models to youngsters, but I completely
disagree with this statement, As according to me the way a character tells the story or nevertheless
portrays the depth or meaning behind the movie is how the people get influenced, surely the
actors are the main components that drive the movie it’s not necessary that their presence makes
it is considered a role model.
Firstly, the hugely successful movie KGF has had a great influence on youngsters, within the teenagers
with them focussing, on his way of fashion walk hairstyle moreover his uncontrollable smoking habit
which had much more influence. Several kids suffered health-related problems due to the sway of
this particular activity shown in the movies.
Secondly, the actors and sports stars have to maintain their bodies perfectly with a perfect diet
which is the selling point for them the more physically fit they are the more famous they tend to be
and this has brought in insecurities amongst the youngsters by forcing them to believe that their
body shapes, the way the look is what getting people liked them. Marketing companies have taken
an advantage of this thought by bringing in more companies to attract customers and increase their
reach.
Although, they do create a positive awareness by bringing out the social messages and the stories of
people that have been hidden under the carpets, for e.g. movies like: - The intern, etc.
In conclusion, the actors play a significant role in this society by being an influence, with proper
garnered support and individual responsibility taken up the actors the situation can improve.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., first, firstly, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20220588235 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75047917989 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.5024630542 185% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.904719876 50.4703680194 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.142857143 104.977214359 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8571428571 20.9669160288 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 7.25397266985 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191759218007 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675939470869 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790305675758 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555296994352 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925828266207 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 12.6369458128 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.9458128079 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.3980295567 165% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., first, firstly, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20220588235 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75047917989 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.5024630542 185% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.904719876 50.4703680194 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.142857143 104.977214359 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8571428571 20.9669160288 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 7.25397266985 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.12807881773 436% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191759218007 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675939470869 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790305675758 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0555296994352 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925828266207 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 12.6369458128 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.9458128079 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.94827586207 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.3980295567 165% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.