5) Parents are responsible for the behavior of the children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Recently the phenomenon of parenting responsibility and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that controlling children behavior is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive. I am inclined to believe that parent’s childcare can be a plus, and I will analyze that through this essay.
From psychologist’s standpoint, parents monitoring can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that good attitude, as well as personal characters, are inextricably bound up. From my own experience, when i was a university student, I conducted an academic research which discovered family background. Hence, beneficial ramifications of nuclear family and size of a family can be seen.
Within the realm of sociologists, depression might increase some consequences of aggressive behavior. Moreover, the fundamental essence of legal decision related to this reality that the demerits of children action pertain to parent’s educational level. As a tangible example, a scientific experiment undertook by a prestigious university has asserted that the downsides of single-mother correlated negatively with crimes. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of bad-parenting.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of parent’s responsibility far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of proper education prove the significance of better children, but also pinpoint introverts implications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 247, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... bound up. From my own experience, when i was a university student, I conducted a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05194805195 5.00649968141 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56241023252 2.71678728327 131% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69696969697 0.580463131201 120% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3942854006 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151303065869 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476916988644 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039285634226 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892319123371 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471117352133 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.81 11.5310837438 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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