Any recent inventions that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society.
Science has revolutionized each and every field. In Today's scenario, the world is accelerating and each day there is a new invention is coming in front of us. Hence, we are dependent on the fast pacing technologies. However, the daily new inventions have its own positive and nefarious side.
Every field nowadays has something to show to the world. One of the recent inventions is a smartphone. The said small box has made people's life more comfortable. There are enormous benefits of this technology. First and foremost, it is a key of information. You can find information of any field only by putting fingers in a keypad.
Second, smartphones provide a feature of installing various applications which help us in our day-to-day life. For example, there are numerous applications relating to enhancing vocabulary, regular health check-ups, business and finance related and so on.
Finally, it is a massive source of entertainment, watching movies with 2D and 3D effects and capture memories is not an arduous task with the invention of a smartphone. However, the flip side of a coin represents adverse impacts of this feature. Emission of radiations from phones is menacing for the health of the human being. Moreover, people are these days getting addicted to this new invention and they are moving in the condition where serious prescription of doctors are needed by them.
In nutshell, Albeit, Smartphones have numerous problems, but its benefits outweigh its disadvantages. Ergo, It is beneficial to use this fascinating gadget with the extra care for avoiding adverse impact on the health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: invention
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Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...are these days getting addicted to this new invention and they are moving in the condition wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03125443522 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633204633205 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1978205491 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0555555556 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107180429728 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312831070959 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530118112067 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528834558881 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041901045124 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.94827586207 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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