The belching and unauthorized behavior is unacceptable in modern offices. How far you support this view? Give your response with justification.
In the modern offices, there are set of guidelines and rules those needs to be followed in office by everyone and some of behaviours are also unacceptable such as belching and unauthorized behaviours. I agree with the notion that belching and unauthorized behaviours should be unacceptable as it affects the working environment and causes negativity as well. This essay will discuss that belching and unauthorized behaviours are highly inappropriate in modern offices.
To commence with, modern offices and organizations follow some set of policies and guidelines to provide more peaceful and healthy working environment. Although belching is a biological process and people hardly have control over it, it is an inappropriate way to releasing the air from your filled stomach which also disturbs other employees and make them feel uncomfortable. For example, a new study shows that people avoid organizing important meeting post lunch as people often blech after having a heavy meal as it makes other workers’ uncomfortable.
Furthermore, a good understanding between workers contribute in company’s growth and even in their personal growth as well, but few employees do not follow these policies and causes trouble to other workers. And some problematic cases are also escalated to the higher managements and HR has to intervene to deal with such complaints and inappropriate behaviour of workers. Some of the unauthorized problems are that people access prohibited sites, content and even share confidential data without management’s consent. For instance, recently, Facebook shared database of personal information of users with many parties to help them in election without user’s consent and they had borne the consequences. Therefore, illegal behaviours in offices shouldn’t be acceptable.
In conclusion, sometimes belching and unauthorized behaviours against companies’ policies and guidelines can cause severe consequences and even can lead to a employees’ termination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the behaviours') or simply say ''some behaviours''.
Suggestion: some of the behaviours; some behaviours
...o be followed in office by everyone and some of behaviours are also unacceptable such as belching ...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...and inappropriate behaviour of workers. Some of the unauthorized problems are that people a...
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Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...evere consequences and even can lead to a employees' termination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 8.36945812808 263% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82154882155 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38837660736 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599326599327 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 379.143842365 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9371222454 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.083333333 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152959596355 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658828474452 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702815431751 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101051495581 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917170550617 0.0609392437508 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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