The claim that animals have "rights" has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals ? Should zoos be banned ? Do you agree or disagree ?
There has been a lot of debate on whether animals have rights, the role of the zoos in the protection or exploitation of animals and if the zoos must be banned. Although zoos deprive animals of their freedom to some extent, they play a part in securing the life of the animals. Hence, I believe that zoos must not be banned but they must be kept in check all the time.
Firstly, the zoos play an instrumental role in helping the animals. For example, the zoos protect wide variety of endangered species of animals which would have otherwise become extinct. Moreover, as the animals are safe in the zoos as compared to the wild where they could be hunted, the population of such animals like Tigers have increased over the past few years. Thus, it is clear that the zoos help in protecting animals.
However, some people believe that the animals are not treated well in the zoos and are kept as prisoners. This could be true to some extent and can be avoided if some key steps are taken. To illustrate, the government must create stringent laws for animal welfare and keep a check on any kind of suspicious activities in the zoo. Furthermore, animal rights activists must also take measures to ensure that the safety and security of the animals in the zoos are given paramount importance and that the governing body in the zoos follow the government laws.
To recapitulate, animals along with human beings are a critical part of the ecosystem. Zoos play a significant role in protecting rare wildlife species and they must not be banned. Instead, the government must lay down stringent laws and ensure that they are followed in the zoos to keep the animals protected.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 293.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72696245734 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50722029253 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494880546075 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5322630121 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9285714286 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319654492613 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132541095278 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621707185345 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223843487209 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475265300433 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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