Some people prefer to spend their holidays in resorts where everything is organized for them and they take little interest in the country they are visiting. Others prefer to travel around the country and to see how the people live, to get to know their customs and traditions and cuisine.
Write and essay on which type of foreign travel you think is best for both the tourist and the local community.
Tourism to foreign destinations is increasing at a great pace and people travel to various countries on holidays. Some people like to spend their time in resorts and enjoy the luxurious facilities, while others enjoy learning about the local cultures and cuisine. In am inclined to believe that both the choices are great for the individuals as well as the local community.
On the one hand, some people like to utilize their holiday time in the luxurious resorts because of the myriad facilities available. For example, resorts provide swimming pools, massage centers, gaming zones, along with delicious food. Travelers get away from the hustle of their busy lives and feel relaxed. Moreover, their are frequent travelers who have already seen the countries and just visit their favorite destinations to get themselves relieved of stress and enjoy.
On the other hand, others prefer to travel around the country to learn about the local culture and tradition. To illustrate, these people might be interested to know more about the art, literature, language and religion practiced in various parts of the nation they are visiting. As a result, it turns out to be a great advantage for the local community because of the increased employment opportunities the tourism brings. Hence, tourists prove to be a boon for the nation as a whole.
To recapitulate, spending time on holidays is a personal choice and tourists must decide for themselves. Both the options are beneficial for the tourists as well as local community because of the increased employment opportunity the tourism brings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...e choices are great for the individuals as well as the local community. On the one hand...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... busy lives and feel relaxed. Moreover, their are frequent travelers who have already...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...options are beneficial for the tourists as well as local community because of the increase...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22178988327 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72981533759 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7631769237 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322524486156 0.242375264174 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102345129859 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654435980244 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175375691141 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698813208459 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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