Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
Some people keep pets to get rid of their loneliness but they do not always take good care of their pets. Such people endanger the lives of the pets as well as those in their vicinity. Hence, I firmly believe that these owners must not be allowed to keep pet animals.
Although, people keep pets they do not take proper care of them. Poor care can lead to various diseases in pets and can not only affect the owner, but also the people near by. For example, if a dog is not properly fed and immunized it can catch Rabbies. If an infected dog bites a human being it can result in the possible death of the person. Moreover, an unhealthy pet can never provide the expected love and affection to its owner. Hence, it is of paramount importance that people who keep pets ensure that they are adequately cared.
Therefore, owners who do not care for their pets must not be allowed to keep them. Government must enforce laws to protect animal rights. Moreover, people must be vigilent and keep an eye on their neighbourhood to ensure that anyone having a pet takes good care of them. The immunity records of the pets must be checked periodically and owners must be liable for any mishappening as a result of improper care. In cases of violations, owners must not be allowed to keep pets and the animals must be sent to shelter homes.
To recapitulate, owners who keep pets must understand the criticality of keeping them in healthy condition and care for them. The owners who do not care for their pets must not be allowed to keep them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... not be allowed to keep pet animals. Although, people keep pets they do not take prop...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...y affect the owner, but also the people near by. For example, if a dog is not properly ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...fed and immunized it can catch Rabbies. If an infected dog bites a human being it ...
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Message: 'He' in subjunctive clause must be used base form of the verb: 'have'.
Suggestion: have
...eir neighbourhood to ensure that anyone having a pet takes good care of them. The immu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 279.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52688172043 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37187717071 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458781362007 0.580463131201 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3907032814 50.4703680194 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9375 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.25397266985 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44891867229 0.242375264174 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195284244637 0.0925447433944 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143194930397 0.071462118173 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317295978269 0.151781067708 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293691493183 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 12.6369458128 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.5310837438 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.32886699507 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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