Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people whether it should be given permission to keep a pets irrespective of the quality of life of the owner. While, some people argue that all people should be given equal opportunity to keep a pet with them. On my point of view, governments has to impose regulations on pet care in order to prevent unnecessary people keeping pets with them. In this esaay, I shall discuss factors o strengthen my view while analyzing both the scenarios.
First and foremost, a person can experience myraid of advantages in keeping a pet with them. For example, those who lives alone keep pets as their companion at home. Besides that, pets like dogs provide security to the premises and people keep cats as pest controllers as well.
On the other hand, some people keep pets only for their purposes and they do not give sufficient care on them. For instance, these kind of situation will expand the risk of increasing the stray dogs population while creating lot of health issues to the tenants and governments consequently incurring lucrative amount of health costs. Therefore, governments should take actions to regulate and monitor the pet care.
In conclusion, it is recommended governments to check on the physical and financial attributes of the pet owner before allowing them to keep a pet. It is beleived, that pets are a good source to controll stress, however governments can include pet care into academic curriculum from the primary education. In nutshell, governments can implement programmes to ensure pets vaccination on time with the aids of non governmental organizations because they are also living creatures like us.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a pet' or simply 'pets'?
Suggestion: a pet; pets
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ve of the quality of life of the owner. While, some people argue that all people shou...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... sufficient care on them. For instance, these kind of situation will expand the risk of in...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation will expand the risk of increasing the stray dogs population while creating...
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Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dogs'' or 'dog's'?
Suggestion: dogs'; dog's
...xpand the risk of increasing the stray dogs population while creating lot of health...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06474820144 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82707268053 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4804862964 50.4703680194 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.25397266985 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357128622976 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145427812086 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969499272214 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223070883252 0.151781067708 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436300862204 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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