Students should be required to stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
School education has been considered to play a significant role in shaping the future of a child. But, students are nowadays dropping out from the school either to pursue their interests or just because they are bored of school education. Hence, mandating the age limit of students to stay in school to eighteen years seems to be a probable solution to this problem.
Firstly, children might prefer to drop out of school because academic education might be boresome to them. In addition, their are some eminent personalities who have been high school dropouts and children would sometimes like to follow their heroes and role models. These reasons make them to drop out of school at an early age in order to pursue their goal in life.
However, it is of paramount importance that children go to school because it imparts into youngsters , various qualities besides academic education. For example, subjects like moral sciences inspire and incorporate into students, virtues like honesty, positive attitude, courage and stewardship which can go a long way in building their future. Moreover, academic qualification is the minimum criteria for getting a good job. Hence, it is essential that students attend school at least till the age of eighteen years.
To recapitulate, schools are the building blocks of a child's career and future. Conforming the age limit of staying in school to eighteen years is only going to help the majority of children in realizing their dreams. Education system can be made more interesting and fun filled to encourage students to go to school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: bored with
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Suggestion: there
...might be boresome to them. In addition, their are some eminent personalities who have...
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, at least, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13565891473 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69348676939 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1410826761 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150306926226 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620510521448 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527326956414 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104136586945 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466370646004 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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