The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
Every living being on earth has a basic right of living freely in its ecosystem, whether they are humans or animals. Some people believe that a zoo is a better place for animals, whereas some people tend to believe that zoo’s are damaging the natural habitat of the animal. I am inclined to believe that natural habitat is the best place for any animal and zoo’s are violating the rights of animals.
Some zoos are not able to provide the best healthcare facilities to its animals. Zoo’s need to generate income in order to fulfil the basic necessities of animals. As per the survey from the animal organization, PETA around one million animals dies in the zoos because of no adequate facilities. The best solution is that animals should be kept in their own habitat so that they can live on their own and face the challenges of nature which will make them tough.
Zoo’s do not provide better facilities in terms of infrastructure and animals are forced to live in their confined spaces. Better infrastructure means an investment of more money which is deliberately avoided by stakeholders. As per the given data from International Animal Organization, there are around three million animals living in the zoo’s having poor infrastructure. The government should give aid to such zoo’s so that they can provide better infrastructure to animals.
Animals have a basic right to live in their natural habitat without any interference from humans. In my opinion, animals have bad psychological effects on brain when not kept in their natural habitat and they must keep free in their own natural habitat.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... generate income in order to fulfil the basic necessities of animals. As per the survey from the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05185185185 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85181337155 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496296296296 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5498472381 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241806975917 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103324528406 0.0925447433944 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534724414558 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162079023765 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035435104318 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 62.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.