Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in the society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Violence showcased on television, news and movies have a negative impact on people, especially teenagers. A few people believe that violence showcased in television and movies induce the criminal behaviour in people, whereas a few likely believe that people have a natural tendency towards criminal activities. This essay will discuss why a few people get influenced towards criminal activities after watching violence on television and movies.
First of all, researchers have confirmed that violence demonstrated on television has a negative impact on human behaviour. Nowadays, criminals are being portrayed as rich individuals living a luxurious life which generally compels teenagers to indulge in criminal activities. For instance, National Bureau of Crime in India has delineated a statistical increase in criminal activities in last one decade. Generally speaking, we should act on this critical issue and indulge people in other activities like sports, reading books.
Second of all, nowadays the media shows criminals as a powerful person in the society, who can deceive law literally easily. Furthermore, Media has a prime focus on increasing TRP and they draw enormous TRPs when they call a person who is in controversy as a result of their wrong acts. Generally speaking, recently a guy named John Miller was invited to a show “Big Brother” despite knowing his criminal background. In contrast, Media should call vigorous personalities and celebrities which can motivate and inspire people who follow them.
All things considered, violence telecasted on television has left a deep impact on peoples mind and also resulted in an increment in criminal behaviour among people. In my opinion, the censor board must implement corrective actions against the content telecasted on television and film fraternity, so that they can showcase genuine content which will be beneficial for people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, so, whereas, for instance, in contrast, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5704467354 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94287715917 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7936441609 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.692307692 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15111671453 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542068249478 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374992367576 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854386818719 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437531703386 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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