Experience is more effective and useful than books and formal education. What is your opinion?
The effectiveness of experience or books and formal education has become a topic of debate among intellectuals and educators. Some people believe that life experience has more importance and effectiveness, whereas some people believe that books and formal education are more useful and effective. This essay will discuss why books and formal education is more effective and useful.
As we know, exercise is good medicine for health in the same way books and formal education helps in brain development in human beings. Books and formal education helps in maintaining the development of neurons in the brain. For instance, researchers at Stanford University revealed that the percentage of neurons in our brain get depleted and can increase the risk of disease like Parkinson, hence, the only way to retain neurons is to read books and have formal education. Generally speaking, neurons can be maintained by reading books and formal education.
Secondly, we know that many job opportunities can be created by having formal education and gaining knowledge by reading books. All corporates have certain criteria which can be fulfilled by only having formal education. For example, I started working as a graduate trainee engineer at Google because I received my formal education from a recognized university. In conclusion, books knowledge and formal education can provide many career opportunities.
This essay discussed why knowledge of books and formal knowledge can help in brain development and provide career opportunities. In my opinion, books and formal education is more effective in that experience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49799196787 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98012534607 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493975903614 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4135500984 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309830172722 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142221581139 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912820808488 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212626569294 0.151781067708 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862822358131 0.0609392437508 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.