Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in the society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Violence showcased on television, news and movies have a negative impact on people, especially teenagers. Some people believe that violence showcased in television and movies induce the criminal behaviour in people, whereas some people believe that people have a natural tendency towards criminal activities. This essay will discuss why some people get influenced towards criminal activities after watching violence on television and movies.
Researchers have confirmed that violence shown on television has a negative impact on human behaviour. Nowadays, criminals are being portrayed as rich individuals living a luxurious life which generally compels teenagers to get into criminal activities. National Bureau of Crime in India has shown a statistical increase in criminal activities in last one decade. We should act on this critical issue and indulge people in other activities like sports, reading books.
Nowadays media shows criminals as a powerful person in the society, who can deceive law really easily. Media has a prime focus on increasing TRP and they get huge TRP’s when they call a person who is in controversy because of their wrong acts. Recently a guy named John Miller was invited to a show “Big Brother” despite knowing his criminal background. Media should call well-educated personalities and celebrities which can motive and inspire people who follow them.
Violence on television has left a deep impact on people and also resulted in an increment in criminal behaviour among people. In my opening censor board must take corrective actions against the content shown on television and film fraternity, so that they can showcase genuine content which will be beneficial for people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55303030303 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83912064918 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5694524174 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153299648039 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557013936807 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372910579084 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858073927928 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405377917602 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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