Do you think consumers should avoid over-packaged products or is it the responsibility of producers?
Over packaging has become a trend among producers which has many impacts on consumers. Some people believe that over packaging is a great initiative to increase sales, whereas some tend to believe that over packaging is a waste of resources and time. This essay will discuss why over the packaging of products is not good for consumers and it has many damaging effects on us.
Packaging cost is always catered in the market price by the manufacturer and this results in an increase in the cost of products. Due to highly competitive markets, manufacturers often try to make packaging very attractive. Amazon has started using the standard packaging which has reduced the cost of many products drastically. Over packaging has done more harm to producers than increasing the sales.
Packaging usually used is made from polyethene and plastic materials which are the major cause of pollution. These packagings are usually thrown away which often damage the ecosystem around us. National Environment Association of Greenland statistics shows that every year millions of aquatic and non-aquatic animals lost their lives when they come in contact with the material. Packaging made of polythene and plastic must be banned in order to protect our environment.
Over packaging must be replaced by conventional packaging to overcome many flaws in the packaging industry. In my opinion, standard packaging will change the face of packaging industries and will help to reduce pollution caused by them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding ecosystem'?
Suggestion: the surrounding ecosystem
... usually thrown away which often damage the ecosystem around us. National Environment Association of Gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29831932773 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78529598745 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8059396409 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242182558787 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966718319162 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624597673835 0.071462118173 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157204545893 0.151781067708 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701624611094 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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