In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages?
Recently, the phenomenon of the tourism industry and its corresponding impacts on developing countries has sparked a heated debate among populations. Although this industry is beneficial as it regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to believe that it can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpoint, there are several merits on expanding the tourism industry on the developing countries. These benefits are rooted in the fact of development. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these benefits. Firstly, this industry has strong impacts on enhancing the economy. By opening the doors and absorbing tourists the cash flow in the country has raised and many job opportunities are created. Furthermore, in order to host the tourist ideally, governments should prepare some facilities and constructing new roads, buildings, parks, bridges, hospitals and hotels. These infrastructures will need to boost the society views and have an array of uses for settlers. In addition, this idea can affect on developing the international languages in the country and increase the tendency of learning new languages among the citizens.
On the one hand, there is no doubt, the idea of attracting tourists to the developing countries has some opponents. They argued that due to poor culture in these countries, dwellers have not sufficient capability of hosting the tourists. Hence, some confrontations or challenges will be occurred between the local people and foreign guests.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of attracting tourists in developing countries are far more outweigh of its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53819444444 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11915927941 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2262750696 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149637901099 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490568165528 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734744865408 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872569628129 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209002853516 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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