Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Nowadays, extreme sports have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "should they be banned?" Although some people think such sports should not be allowed, I tend to believe that they are advantageous.
From an economic point of view, risky sports are indeed bound up tightly with economic growth, which it might lead to both attraction of spectators and influx of internatinal currency. For example, a group of profound economists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to establish the relationship between economic growth and financial achievements as well as the number of keen spotmen. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that hazardous sports are correlated positively with not only making money but also economic issues.
In medical terms. dangerous sports such as skiing and rafting are attributable to healthy athletes, in that it would lead to reduction of depression rate, being fit, and building self-confidence. A well-known example of such attributions is recreational activities, which are cause for concern since they might had been mistaken to take such activities for granted. Had they provided sportmen with entertainment, they might have had the opportunity to entertain people. Thus, risk-taking sports could play a significant role in keeping persons healthy.
To recapitulate, I entirely disagree with banning extreme sports. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to strict some legislation, and individuals are hoped to jieghten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65725806452 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15308916047 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673387096774 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.428748524 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.545454545 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136214034634 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465098096546 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595758219924 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837757493108 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607002284696 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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