The mass media, including TV, radio, and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
Nowadays, the role of the media has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "does it shape the opinions of individuals?" Although some people argue that mediums do not affect the ideas of humans, I tend to believe that it could build people's thoughts.
From a social point of view, the mass media is indeed bound up tightly with the views, which means it might lead to both behavior changes and various lifestyles. For example, a group of profound social scientists, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to understand the relationship between the print media and forming the habits of citizens, the imitation of lifestyles as well as behavior patterns. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that national media is correlated positively with not only behavioral changes but also social habits.
In educational terms, TV is undoubtedly attributable to educational programs, in that it would lead to the intellectual growth of students, the latest news, and the formation of viewing habits. A well-known example of such attributions is educational needs, which are cause for concern since they had been mistaken to take trained teachers for granted. Had they taught pupils in advance, they might have had the opportunity to train instructors. Thus, visual media could play a significant role in education systems.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree with the significant role of the mass mediums in shaping attitudes. However, as every garden may have some weeds, local authorities are recommended to enforce some legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...adays, the role of the media has become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38432835821 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.076082379 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630597014925 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.5217654848 50.4703680194 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.3 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.9669160288 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170302817967 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605278057558 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427711272239 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948970723543 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288661133287 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 12.6369458128 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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