The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
Mass media has significantly changed our cognitive pattern. This is very apparent way of our daily lives and our surroundings today. It is strongly agreed that people’s ideology is massively influenced by Tv, Radio and newspapers. This will be proven by analysing how these mediums have shaped people’s ideas about lifestyle and habits.
To begin with, Mass media has constantly bombarded people with adverts, worldwide trends, fashion etc. The viewers get captivated and try to imitate that. For Instance, Televisions cover the life style of celebrities in jazzy manner and consequently most youngsters try to act and dress like them. This example clearly shows influence of mass media is constantly changing our life style and perceptions. Thus, mass media plays a great role in shaping one’s ideas.
Moreover, many people rely on weather prediction of mass media so that they can dress accordingly. For example, Melbourne city is known for its Capricious Climate. So, to hedge against the risk people check weather prediction before going out. This, habit of checking weather conditions is a clear example of impact of mass media as well as our growing dependency on it. Thus, TV, radio and newspapers have contributed in molding people’s habits.
This analysis proves the influence of mass media in altering people’s lives. In a nutshell, there is strong positive correlation between mass media and people’s ideology. It is expected that’s these channels will dominantly keep influencing human thinking.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50420168067 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95718333341 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638655462185 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6371064805 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.0588235294 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351689978587 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115170177383 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799390425523 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215210443576 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253128110103 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.