The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
The mass media, including TV, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
Mass media, it is a medium between the people and information. TV, radio and newspaper and online blogs will change the people minds lavishly. These mass media have extravagant power to convince the matter which they wanted to. I agree with this statement, mass media have influence in changing people.
To begin with, people are very much dependent on the media. By watching the TV’s and online blogs people are changing their life style and forgetting their traditional life style and shifted to western life styles. Media like TV, radio and news paper is also helpful for business to their products and increases their sales.
On the other hand, now a days people are following the television as much as, for instance, the city like melleboune climate conditions will change frequently, people who want to go out sets by themselves according to the climate by watching weather conditions outside.
To conclude this, the mass media is spectacular way to spread the knowledge and information which directly impact the people behavior life style and their habits. In my opinion, media is just gives the information what they know, think a enquire what correct and judge others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...n life styles. Media like TV, radio and news paper is also helpful for business to their p...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...reases their sales. On the other hand, now a days people are following the television as ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 236, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s the information what they know, think a enquire what correct and judge others. ...
^
Line 6, column 236, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s the information what they know, think a enquire what correct and judge others.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14159292035 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55057696795 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.1189156894 50.4703680194 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3846153846 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506252725916 0.242375264174 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197231744471 0.0925447433944 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159518397824 0.071462118173 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324677361765 0.151781067708 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.346684927509 0.0609392437508 569% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.94827586207 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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