Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
For some people, extreme sports are seemed as a job. They need to practice such sports for living. However, others have those sports as hobbies. They like to adventure it does no matter how dangerous the sport may be. In my opinion, skiing, rafting, diving, and other extreme sports ought not to be banned because they are ways to keep healthy, to make money and to retrieve strains in life and feel pleasure.
First of all, people practice skiing to make money. It is the only way they have to survive. They attend championship with other highly trained players and do their best so as to win competitions. Therefore, they must be involved in as many tournaments as they can in order to make a lot of money for living.
Moreover, other people realize extreme sports as hobbies. These sports are taken to mitigate people's problem. I remember when I was at college, I used to practice a lot of diving. First because it helped me to ditch college drawbacks and second because it made me to acquire more information about my study field, hence I delved into the marine biology.
Furthermore, practicing dangerous sports helps to preserve our body. As we work out as many time as possible, we can maintain the body healthiness.
Finally, instead of being banned, sports must be require for everyone due to the fact that not only are they a money like way, but they are also health and pleasure ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ighly trained players and do their best so as to win competitions. Therefore, they must ...
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Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...to preserve our body. As we work out as many time as possible, we can maintain the body h...
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Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'money'.
Suggestion: money
... due to the fact that not only are they a money like way, but they are also health and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, as to, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66801619433 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46366837321 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599190283401 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3231311072 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0625 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 2.91625615764 309% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204090399012 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067440837563 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671516394146 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111189529012 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908184258533 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 11.5310837438 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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