Give an example of an accomplished person whose success didn’t have any effect of his bad neighbourhood
There is no denying that where one is raised plays an instrumental role in contributing to one’s success. In this essay, I will elaborate the story of such a successful person whose accomplishments can largely be attributed to the environment he was brought up in. This person is Dr A.P. J. Abdul Kalam, who became an eminent scientist as well as the president of India.
There are a myriad of ways how Abdul Kalam benefited from the atmosphere he was brought up in. The most conspicuous one is that both his parents were highly educated with plenty of support in numerous forms. Not only did the congenial environment at home motivate him to succeed, but the impoverished and underprivileged society he was raised in also encouraged him more to become something so that he could bring a positive change in the lives of these destitute people. Needless to say, the place one grows up in can stand one in good stead, in terms of achieving success.
Another pivotal aspect of Abdul Kalam’s life is that the suffering and hardship he went through in childhood made him more capable to deal with the arduous and cumbersome pressures of life in future. Besides, poverty and struggle made him determined to eradicate poverty from society. Hence, it is apparent how his financial insolvency has made him a warrior to change the world.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the impact of the ambience one grows up in is indeed too great to ignore, as far as attaining success in
life is concerned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rduous and cumbersome pressures of life in future. Besides, poverty and struggle made him...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82196969697 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80347815833 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598484848485 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4819974073 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.083333333 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121326413787 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475059760109 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451864090506 0.071462118173 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075347941325 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817930440854 0.0609392437508 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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