How widely do you think that problem spread that people spend too much time on
work than their personal life and experience time shortage. What problem it could cause?
Nowadays, the phenomenon of spending excessive time in the workplace has sparked a debate across the world.
Although several people support the idea of working overtime and spending time in the office than at home, others support the idea of spending time with family members. This essay will illustrate the advantages and demerits along with its consequence.
To begin with, today's job market is competitive and employees work on demanding jobs with multiple time zones.
Further, due to cut-throat competition and work pressure employees spend more time in the workplace. Not only it influences the health of employees but also family relationships. For example, in Japan employees spend more than 14 hours per day in the office, neglecting family matters which has intensified the divorce rate in the country.
From the social standpoint, many workers suffer health ailments like vitamin D deficiency, obesity and severe stress which result in a financial burden on the family and employee. Researchers at Harvard University concluded that people who spend more time in the office miss numerous family functions, such as a child's birthday and many other family functions.
To conclude, as per statements aforementioned, spending more time in the office will influence personal life drastically. It is recommended to distribute the time equally and adjust the work-life balance for a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 20.9802955665 24% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48858447489 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87521161116 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8566577858 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.272727273 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17608874403 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709138698202 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558492578196 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814626355135 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508264222979 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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