How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause.
In the world of cut throat competition, everyone is running behind the money to achieve a better life. People spend too much time on work than their personal life and have less time for themselves and their loved ones. I think, this definitely causes physical and mental health problems and relationships also get hampered. This essay will discuss the problems caused and suggest the solution.
To commence with, everyone is running in rat-race and want to achieve better to remain in the competition and maintain the so-called society status. To get more, neglecting importance of personal life and their bond with the family specially with children. As children feel neglecting and least important are prone to adapt bad habits easily. For example, according to recent survey, children who have more criminal records are generally got least attention by their working parents. Therefore, people needs to start giving importance to their personal relationship and give sufficient time and love when it’s required the most.
Furthermore, in today technology era, people generally have 5-9 sitting job which makes them more passive and mentally drained out. This causes many physical and mental health issue such as obesity, weak eyesight, high stress and depression. For instance, in my company, sales manager last month caught the cardio attack because of high sales target. Hence, people should understand that work is important to earn money for healthy life, not healthy life needs to be put on stack because of work.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that more time spend at work place causes serious health and relationship problems. To cope up with that people needs to start treating themselves on priority as its first step to love others and maintain a healthy and happy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'got the least'.
Suggestion: got the least
...ave more criminal records are generally got least attention by their working parents. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 292.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26712328767 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53930446768 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.1563426224 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.533333333 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.25397266985 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249020247266 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784688944491 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981549784749 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158803106099 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113455736306 0.0609392437508 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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